Hi Marwa, I think you did a good job of proof reading before you posted this, because it still flowed and mostly made sense! I liked how you used a range of punctuation and language to make your writing interesting. Keep building on your descriptive writing skills for Year 7 next year!
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ReplyDeleteSorry if I did some of the sentence doesn't make sense, I took a screen shot and I am lazy to fix it. ;(
Hi Marwa,
ReplyDeleteI think you did a good job of proof reading before you posted this, because it still flowed and mostly made sense! I liked how you used a range of punctuation and language to make your writing interesting. Keep building on your descriptive writing skills for Year 7 next year!