Thursday 22 October 2015

Marwa The Sun Poetry (T4W2)

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  1. Anonymous22 October 2015 at 12:28

    Hi marwa,
    your metaphors are great and your adjectives and similes and verbs im interest in your work keep it up.

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  5. Anonymous22 October 2015 at 12:29

    Hi Marwa,
    I like the way you used interesting adjectives similes and verbs.
    Keep it up!

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  6. Anonymous22 October 2015 at 12:30

    Hey Marwa I liked the way you described your sun with adjectives similes and metaphors.

    Keep It up!!

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  7. Anonymous22 October 2015 at 12:48

    Marwa this amazing and really cool you are awsome

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  8. Anonymous22 October 2015 at 12:56

    THANK YOU EVERYONE FOR COMMENTING AND TELLING ME WHAT I HAVE TO WORK ON FOR NEXT TIME!

    KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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  9. Anonymous23 October 2015 at 10:15

    Marwa what an Amazing poem about the sun i really like the way you a netball player

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  10. Anonymous23 October 2015 at 10:58

    NIce poem marwa Keep up the good work.

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